Therefore, the symbol of the beach helps the audience to further develop understanding of the oppressive and damaging consequences of discrimination on society. This is a great essay that fully answers the question and uses examples well to support your ideas. ET12 Hi seaurchin I think this essay is rather light in content itself on symbolism. In addition, when Vincent and Anton are adults, we see a close up shot of Anton struggling to swim, and about to drown. Hiya essaystuff, You clearly know the text but you need to focus on discussing ‘analyse how’ and the ‘purpose’ of the text. Although the guilt was hidden, it always remained within Amir whether he noticed or not.
I would love feedback and maybe a possible grade? Hello studyit, I would like to ask you guys about symbolism in both visual and written essays. Visual essay Hello english teachers! Kia ora Studyer, I have attached your very good essay with some comments to think about. Hello Studyit, I’ve tried editing my essay, I was wondering whether you guys could please read over my essay and give me some feedback. Sign-up here it’s free.
Hi Oza I’ve looked at your essays and made comments ET11 hi teachers Can you please give me feedback on these two essays i have written. Keep up the revision.
Thanks heaps in advance Kia ora cait Save your document with a shorter file name so that we can read your engliwh. Because I was just writing a practice essay with the question: Hi, If possible, would someone please please be able to have a look at this film essay for me.
Using qudstions words does not necessarily improve the quality of your essay – it fact a controlled and succinct essay can frequently be more impressive. Significant event subjectstodo wrote: Maybe the setting creates conflict, tension and complications – such as in Mississippi Burning or the setting is vital for the events of the plot such as “[u]Shawshank “. Amir admitted to being a coward. Thanks you Hi subjectstodo YES. For example in The Shawshank Redemption, Red compares sound of the opera singers to birds.
The beach is a lvel of genoism, as only genetically superior valids possess the abilities to overcome its strong currents. Might I suggest you don’t always post the whole essay into the levvel – just an attachment.
Hi, could you please give me advice on my practice essay for the film Pleasantville? Keep up the great work!
Amir made a mistake, a huge mistake due to cowardice and selfishness. Thank you so much for any help that you can give. I would also strengthen your conclusion and your intro – see my suggestions for this on the attached. Check through the essay.
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Niccol employs the use of the beach twice, to present the ideas of how discrimination is so strong that it may divide even the closest of relationships, and also how englosh lead to lwvel structural isolation of groups in society. It would be really great to be able to get excellence on this paper so anything that could help towards that would be extraordinarily helpful, particularly in the ‘perceptive’ aspects!
I like the way you have structured this, and there is plenty of detailed evidence as well as “beyond the text. Level 2 Film Essay. My main concern with the essay paragraph on the setting question is whether the setting relates to the character.
Thank you so much. Amir and Sohrab start to spend more time together as Amir found out Sohrab is in fact his nephew. Please, may I have some feedback on how I can improve my essay for a higher grade? The way that you have described Andy in the above paragraph doesn’t really sound like you have discussed Andy as a symbol, but just a character.
I find it hard writing for three symbols without rambling on and creating long paragraphs. Amir finds Sohrab and saves him from becoming an orphan.
Not all texts use symbolism, however, when used it can be repeated throughout the text as a quick way of expressing a complex idea. Kia ora Oza, Essay and comments are attached.
ET10 hi teachers Can you please neca me some feedback on this essay. If you could give me some feed back that would be wonderful, and maybe whether I answered the question to it’s full extent?
Hi could I please have some advice on how to improve this essay? A third significant setting in Gattaca is the beach.
He is finally safe and Amit is proud of his actions.